Lone Brave

Alone again, fighting shadows Morning the memories of tomorrows Making plans for coming past Hoping that moments will last Making blows against foes unseen Who have guns and blades in between Where the only weapon is courage While trying to dodge their unjust rage April 1, 2024, SPC, PST

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/1/2024 7:00:00 AM

Dear RB, Wow, this speaks volumes about resilience in the face of adversity. Your words are filled with the courage of one standing tall amidst shadows, facing unseen foes with unwavering determination. Each line is a testament to the indomitable spirit that refuses to succumb to the darkness. Your poetry inspires hope and strength, even in solitary battles, bravery shines brightest. Your courage is a beacon of light in a world too often shrouded in shadows. - Blessings, Daniel

R. B. Cawis
Date: 4/1/2024 8:20:00 PM

Thank you very much dear Daniel... I've been through a lot of battles but what I'm going through right now seems like a war... And sadly, I feel like a one - man army braving the winds from every direction, armed with nothing but only courage...