London: Foggy Redoubt

ocean stirs salt mist
vapor shield shrouds firmament
brackish mail cloaks town
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 11:00 PM
some great word choices in this one too. London sounds too foggy for me!
Marymkilker Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 11:03 AM
thankyou for the read
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