L.O.L (Thank You Poet Destroyer) :)

Hold on mom I just started a poem
Go to bed I pay the bills I own this home
But im almost done, "You said you just started"
I did but this poem is retarded
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mascarenhas Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 12:52 AM
lol nice...... cheers oscar
King Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 9:34 PM
lol...this is funny...very different...like it
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June 8, 2010 at 2:54 AM
lol the tittle change from the last time i read your write, enjoyed,..p.d.
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June 8, 2010 at 12:21 AM
Okay i would call it L.O.L. sorry that is what i did when i read the ending of your poem. Have a nice one,..Sidney LeeAnn
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