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Logic in Mist

I sat down with a notebook A soft buzz in my head Words were there Then slipped away Like smoke through fingers Disappearing into thin air Ideas floated just out of reach Like clouds in a sky too bright Drifting… Never landing… The pen hovered, touching the paper Then the ink ran Like a dream fading at dawn I tried to grasp A thought or spark It unraveled… A tangled thread of meaning Too fine to trace I laughed, maybe too loud Wondering if the silence Had more to say Than the words I could not find The clock ticked slowly Time stretched like elastic Nothing stuck Nothing anchored I stared at the page Waiting for the wind To bring the words back But they lingered in the mist… A flock of birds Just out of sight Beyond the reach Of this hazy morning

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Date: 4/26/2025 12:58:00 PM
Thanks for nothing, but please understand that I mean this in a positive way. When one can write an excellent poem about a difficulty, he has certainly achieved victory. I'm enchanted.
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Christopher Delegans
Date: 4/28/2025 10:15:00 AM
Thanks, Hilda. That's very nice of you to say. Appreciate you reading and commenting.

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