David Scott Poet Rhyme

LoGgEr HeAdS

Now in diffrent beds
But you liked to stray!
What one now dreads
Your game you play,

Always at logger heads
It seems day after day!
Tearing each other shreads
Things we would both say

Someones called the feds
Now they are on their way
Did you take your meds?
You are starting to sway

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CayCay Godwin August 21, 2026 at 4:07 PM This is clever in that, to me, it shows how the dysfunction between a couple can turn loving once the cops are called, meaning anything seriously wrong other than as caused by them, can turn them tender. They were just doing their thing while, sadly, unaware of what it was doing to them. CayCay David Scott August 22, 2026 at 12:58 PM Was not that bad just play on words was not going to put this one one hete thoigh trail of thought at time working on something else decided to keep xx

Alison A Smith August 21, 2026 at 5:22 AM A darkly comic take on a toxic relationship, with the “game” turning from verbal sparring into real consequences. The repeated -eds and -ay rhymes give it a catchy, almost taunting momentum that suits the escalating tension. David Scott August 22, 2026 at 12:49 PM This l was not going to put on here felt stupid just play on words belive me relationship was not thay dramatic apreciaye your kind words xx