Notes About The Poem

Loftiest Reflections

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                                          Reflection top, bottom question
                                               Desire excellent loftiest
                                           Closer to the soon ascension
                                       Not trapped down in very deepest
                                   Feel the height, breeze, absorb the blue
                                       Suppress carnal; emotions subdue

In honor of John Freeman's contest
"New Contest:Another Nature Verse"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 9:47 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Another, Nature Verse" contest Sara. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 5:38 PM
Thanks sis for a lovely verse worthy of honor. And thanks for supporting my contest. Agape, Moses
Ramage Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 1:52 AM
My apologies for taking so long to send congratulations but I have not been well. I am sending congrats now. Take care. Lee
Mehta Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 12:41 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Sara
Quigley Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 10:34 AM
Congratulations on your win Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 12:28 AM
Congrats Sara on a wonderful win with these lovely lines of poetic art my friend..luv..
Martin Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 3:47 PM
Quite the writers ride in just a few short lines. Your thoughts take me beyond time:) Well done Sara Kendrick
Jones Avatar
September 22, 2011 at 7:39 PM
Why not just incorporate it all? Thanks for the write, Sara.. ponderable stuff! Beauty eve~N
Maverick Avatar
September 22, 2011 at 2:12 PM
enjoyed the variety within this piece Sara..
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 22, 2011 at 7:22 AM
Simply sublime! I am sure this will be in the winners circle Sara.
Effendi Avatar
September 22, 2011 at 4:55 AM
Excellent write, Sara, and great expression. Good luck in the contest with this superb piece
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2011 at 1:36 AM
INteresting how you took this to another level, not just focusing on the scenery! I am sure John will love it!
Sivey Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 8:30 PM
I really liked this write...I can feel being there! Incredible poem!! Good luck in the contest!!
Sweetheart Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 7:01 PM
exquisite depiction of the photo Sara and a lovely rhyme that flows my friend.. good luck in the contest luv.. a breathtaking view..
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