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Loco Motive

what was going through your mind when you tied her to the tracks i think i can i think i can

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/21/2019 11:29:00 AM

BAH HA HA (yes, I have a dark sense of humour)

Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/21/2019 1:01:00 PM

Thanks. Cool fish name. Old commercial where Darth is sitting breathing. Heidi Klum sits next to him. Rapid breathing begins. I suppose it depends on how beauty is defined.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/21/2019 12:05:00 PM

Oh, get well. I have a gold fish named Darth. He's pretty quiet.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/21/2019 12:02:00 PM

Yes, join the dark side Maureen hahaha. My yearly fit of bronchitis has me breathing like Darth lol