Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Locked Up Light

A silky satin sash about the box
   Can keep your present's secret for a while
But certain sources, call them 'leaky locks'
   Reveal that which is hidden in your smile



            
             Iambic Pentameter

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Hello There December 2, 2019 at 10:16 PM Awe, this is precious, Gershon! Gershon Wolf December 3, 2019 at 1:55 PM Thank you so much for you lovely comment, H.T! Season's best, Gershon

Chris Green December 2, 2019 at 9:10 AM Really nicely done my friend. Loved this. Gershon Wolf December 2, 2019 at 1:29 PM Thanks for the appreciaton, Chris! Cheers, Gershon

Na Na December 1, 2019 at 9:48 PM Well done Gershon. I havent tried this form yet Gershon Wolf December 1, 2019 at 10:37 PM Iambic pentameter's really best for sonnets, but I didn't have the time tonght…. Hence, the poem you've read and graciously commented on. Thank you, Gregory. Cheers, Gershon