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Locked Up Light

A silky satin sash about the box Can keep your present's secret for a while But certain sources, call them 'leaky locks' Reveal that which is hidden in your smile Iambic Pentameter

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Hello There

Date: 12/2/2019 10:16:00 PM

Awe, this is precious, Gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/3/2019 1:55:00 PM

Thank you so much for you lovely comment, H.T! Season's best, Gershon

Chris Green

Date: 12/2/2019 9:10:00 AM

Really nicely done my friend. Loved this.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/2/2019 1:29:00 PM

Thanks for the appreciaton, Chris! Cheers, Gershon

Na Na

Date: 12/1/2019 9:48:00 PM

Well done Gershon. I havent tried this form yet

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/1/2019 10:37:00 PM

Iambic pentameter's really best for sonnets, but I didn't have the time tonght…. Hence, the poem you've read and graciously commented on. Thank you, Gregory. Cheers, Gershon