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Locked Into a Dream

The key to hold on to you never to let you go In this my illusion of life’s rapid stream, When not alone and with those you know I will hold on to you never to let you go. Your silent face in mist does grace with eyes all aglow Penetrating the sunlit beam brings about my dream, The key to hold on to you never to let you go In this my illusion of life’s rapid stream. © Harry J Horsman 2014 © Mandy M Tams 2014

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Bl Devnath

Date: 10/7/2014 2:25:00 PM

Very young and enthusiastic poem beautifully worded. Sweet illusion continues until woke up, so let it continue and enjoy. Lovely done, my lovely friend,bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/6/2014 5:31:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one today..Way to go with the chances in the repeat line to make it flow more readily..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2014 8:46:00 PM

You guys produced a beautiful triolet together. It really is a nice one, Harry. And about my city lights, when I wake up without my good eyesight , everything DOES seem like science fiction!!!

Juli- Michelle

Date: 10/3/2014 11:10:00 AM

I love the words in this poem, they are so beautiful and they flow so elegantly. "penetrating the sunlit beam" ... lovely. Thanks for stopping by my work the other day, have a good one :) -Juli-Michelle