Harry Horsman Poet Triolet

Locked Into a Dream

The key to hold on to you never to let you go
In this my illusion of life’s rapid stream,
When not alone and with those you know
I will hold on to you never to let you go.
Your silent face in mist does grace with eyes all aglow
Penetrating the sunlit beam brings about my dream,
The key to hold on to you never to let you go
In this my illusion of life’s rapid stream.

© Harry J Horsman 2014 © Mandy M Tams 2014

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Bl Devnath October 7, 2014 at 2:25 PM Very young and enthusiastic poem beautifully worded. Sweet illusion continues until woke up, so let it continue and enjoy. Lovely done, my lovely friend,bl

Sara Kendrick October 6, 2014 at 5:31 PM Enjoyed reading this one today..Way to go with the chances in the repeat line to make it flow more readily..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara

Andrea Dietrich October 5, 2014 at 8:46 PM You guys produced a beautiful triolet together. It really is a nice one, Harry. And about my city lights, when I wake up without my good eyesight , everything DOES seem like science fiction!!!

Juli- Michelle October 3, 2014 at 11:10 AM I love the words in this poem, they are so beautiful and they flow so elegantly. "penetrating the sunlit beam" ... lovely. Thanks for stopping by my work the other day, have a good one :) -Juli-Michelle

Nette Onclaud October 1, 2014 at 5:34 AM I found it engrossing and inspiring to read, harry... the word choice is gentle, flowing, and affectionate!.. huggs

Liam Mcdaid September 30, 2014 at 11:50 AM very nicely painted picture beautifully penned hartry

Andrea Dietrich September 29, 2014 at 3:57 PM GREAT lines you two came up with. I hope this is in the triolet contest, but will it be under your name, Harry? VEry nice triolet from you guys.

Paul Callus September 29, 2014 at 3:06 PM Excellent triolet, both of you Harry & Mandy. I love the "illusion of life’s rapid stream". // paul

Jack Horne September 29, 2014 at 10:46 AM love this tender write, Harry

Jan Allison September 29, 2014 at 10:46 AM beautifully penned a lovely collaboration:-) Hugs jan xxx

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 29, 2014 at 9:52 AM beautiful xx

Dr.Ram Mehta September 29, 2014 at 9:27 AM Well composed Triolet on friendship, harry. good luck

Richard Lamoureux September 29, 2014 at 8:56 AM What a beautiful collaboration. I'm honored to be the first to comment.