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Locked In a Smile Part I

locked in a smile are secrets untold reality waiting for love to unfold anxiously waiting are words that are kept inside my heart to an unknown depth for unto you i give my eyes for my eyes there is no greater prize for unto you i give my ears for each utterance and every syllable it hears

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/28/2012 1:11:00 PM

nice onto the next part

David Williams

Date: 5/8/2012 6:52:00 AM

smile, I like this..David

John Rhinem

Date: 5/5/2012 7:42:00 PM

Ps. Smile ˜ "Hi Baby, I Never Told Your Loveliness How Much I Love You Name Did I ? Nor Have I Told Your Beauty, Tis Sooo Very True ! 'My Beautiful Love.'" *

Date: 5/5/2012 7:49:00 PM

...."Also, Thank You, For 'Your Warm Sweeet Visit.'" *

Daver Austin

Date: 5/5/2012 2:08:00 PM

Yes. The many types of smiles are fascinating, You have to guess what's in back of them. Good write, John. Love, daver

Date: 5/5/2012 7:18:00 PM

...."SMILE, 'YESSS INDEED.'" *

Kash Poet

Date: 5/5/2012 12:36:00 PM

How do you know 5/7/5 is the right way?

John Rhinem

Date: 5/5/2012 11:34:00 AM

Smile ˜ Hi Baby, I Give My Your Lovely Beauty, Sweeet Kisses Too * My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜

Date: 5/5/2012 11:40:00 AM

...."Ooops, I Meant 'Sheer Beauty.'" *

Date: 5/5/2012 11:37:00 AM

...."A Soft Sweeet Favourite, 'In Shear Beauty.'" *

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 5/5/2012 8:01:00 AM

Oh John, this is more than sweet. This is very close to a beautiful Song my dear friend. Just add and delete few words and you can make it a Song with a depth so sweet and lovely. Thanks my friend for liking my series Epic. It was nice to visit your locked smile. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...John Loving III

James Peranteau

Date: 5/5/2012 3:35:00 AM

A passionate write Mr. Loving ! Each day I pray to Jehovah God in Jesus Christ's name, for Him to guide me with my children. I did so with my 28 yr old son, whom I also single parented, as I do with Noah. My 28 yr. old has his own trucking business(18 wheeler)cross country...and he still calls me every day to tell me that he loves me, and when he passes by Noah and my home, he stops by to visit ! I'm blessed ! *smiles* Have a blessed weekend sir...much love, james

John Loving Iii
Date: 5/5/2012 3:42:00 PM

i am a trucker too but local. if he's ever in the St. Louis area tell him to holler for little johnny.

Kash Poet

Date: 5/4/2012 11:53:00 AM

yeah...5/4/3.