Locked In a Smile Part I

locked in a smile
are secrets untold
reality waiting for love 
to unfold
anxiously waiting are words 
that are kept
inside my heart
to an unknown depth
for unto you i give my eyes
for my eyes there is 
no greater prize
for unto you i give my ears
for each utterance and 
every syllable it hears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Babcock Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 1:11 PM
nice onto the next part
Williams Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 6:52 AM
smile, I like this..David
Rhinem Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 7:42 PM
Ps. Smile ˜ "Hi Baby, I Never Told Your Loveliness How Much I Love You Name Did I ? Nor Have I Told Your Beauty, Tis Sooo Very True ! 'My Beautiful Love.'" *
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May 5, 2012 at 7:49 PM
...."Also, Thank You, For 'Your Warm Sweeet Visit.'" *
Austin Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 2:08 PM
Yes. The many types of smiles are fascinating, You have to guess what's in back of them. Good write, John. Love, daver
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May 5, 2012 at 7:18 PM
...."SMILE, 'YESSS INDEED.'" *
Poet Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 12:36 PM
How do you know 5/7/5 is the right way?
Rhinem Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 11:34 AM
Smile ˜ Hi Baby, I Give My Your Lovely Beauty, Sweeet Kisses Too * My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜
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May 5, 2012 at 11:40 AM
...."Ooops, I Meant 'Sheer Beauty.'" *
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May 5, 2012 at 11:37 AM
...."A Soft Sweeet Favourite, 'In Shear Beauty.'" *
Kapoor Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 8:01 AM
Oh John, this is more than sweet. This is very close to a beautiful Song my dear friend. Just add and delete few words and you can make it a Song with a depth so sweet and lovely. Thanks my friend for liking my series Epic. It was nice to visit your locked smile. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...John Loving III
Peranteau Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 3:35 AM
A passionate write Mr. Loving ! Each day I pray to Jehovah God in Jesus Christ's name, for Him to guide me with my children. I did so with my 28 yr old son, whom I also single parented, as I do with Noah. My 28 yr. old has his own trucking business(18 wheeler)cross country...and he still calls me every day to tell me that he loves me, and when he passes by Noah and my home, he stops by to visit ! I'm blessed ! *smiles* Have a blessed weekend sir...much love, james
Poet Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 11:53 AM
yeah...5/4/3.
Minardi Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 9:38 AM
I'm on my way to read the second part. This is very sweet, John. :)
Carrillo Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 6:16 PM
This is a very nice poem that I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Carrillo Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 6:14 PM
This is a very nice poem that I enjoyed reading. thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Kendrick Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 4:54 PM
This sounds really serious..Enjoyed reading this eve..Good to be that devoted ...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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