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This is speaking to my fellow Americans. Love ya all!

imprisoned in one’s own home — fear of the masses’ mind the old stretch out to the skies — passing sweeter clouds as they pass on as the young adults squeeze on masks, their disguise, sore afraid they coat themselves in gel — head to foot disease, not one sneeze one thinks, or rather surrenders to skittish instinct: — don’t look their way, don’t touch their hand watch out for the industrial strength keg of Lysol spray, right in your eyes...aimed at your heart I’ve seen better ways amidst the pews, the chosen few — who continue to love inside and outside the doors Hey, you — wash hands, yes do. Suds them up, rinse for at least twenty seconds. Yessiree, stay home if you’re sick. be conscientious...heck, be conscious! stay off cruises for now. don’t gather in claustrophobic crowds now i know someone is thinking about the sanctimonious one — surely some in the masses love their fellow man just like me i hope you ALL do. no one wants to feel like a leper, get murder threats, feel isolated by mankind — it could be you, so be kind…be kind...be kind! — please be kind 3/10/2020 *My daughter witnessed an ugly scene at work yesterday. I pray my lovely poet community loves their community!

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Date: 3/10/2020 6:46:00 PM
Hello Kim,yes Italy and Spain as well. It is not safe to travel. Cruise ships cancellations. I do not blame them. Some people died from this illness. It is scary. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/11/2020 8:26:00 AM
Hello Kim, you are welcome. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs.Darlene
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2020 9:30:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene.
Date: 3/10/2020 10:05:00 AM
It’s understandable that people would be frightened of Coronavirus, but some are taking it too far, as your final lines suggest, Kim! Time to be calm, reasonable ...and kind. Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2020 10:32:00 AM
Yes, we all feel a little afraid...if not for ourselves, for those in vulnerable conditions. Yet we must not be overcome by fear. Now some countries have it worse so that is not my audience. <3 Kim

Book: Shattered Sighs