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Reality hit him in the face ~ Glad it wasn't in the other place

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Date: 10/11/2021 4:53:00 PM
LOL! That would be kicked him in the a—h you know.
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Date: 10/11/2021 11:31:00 AM
Too true; it could have happened in a church whilst the choir were singing, "I kneed thee every hour"!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/11/2021 1:09:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! Now that's the Spirit! Just Divine. :) gw
Date: 10/11/2021 10:23:00 AM
Whoa! You did not! What? Yes you did!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/11/2021 1:09:00 PM
I see that you know the hiding place of the family jewels. lol. ~ gw
Date: 10/11/2021 5:20:00 AM
Love the rhythm, flow and the pun! Precise and strong! Great one.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/11/2021 1:00:00 PM
A bullseye on this one hurts to even think about it. lol. Thanks for visiting my site, Silpika. Joy and Light, Gershon
Date: 10/11/2021 5:04:00 AM
...it used to be applied a bit lower and from a different direction...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/11/2021 12:59:00 PM
Exactly the point... Thanks, John.
Date: 10/11/2021 2:18:00 AM
Nice work here Mr Wolf, A stinging reality couplet if ever there was one. Cheers David
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/11/2021 12:54:00 PM
Thanks, David. I like how used the term 'stinging' in your comment. Cheers, Gershon
Date: 10/10/2021 5:00:00 PM
HA! Short & snappy.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/10/2021 7:32:00 PM
HA! You know what rhymes with 'snappy' -- cra -- oops, Happy! Joy Forever, Gershon
Date: 10/10/2021 3:45:00 PM
good one GW:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/10/2021 7:31:00 PM
Hey, thank you Jan! Cheers, Gershon

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