Location, Location

Reality hit him in the face ~
  Glad it wasn't in the other place
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Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 4:53 PM
LOL! That would be kicked him in the a—h you know.
Leffanta Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 11:31 AM
Too true; it could have happened in a church whilst the choir were singing, "I kneed thee every hour"!
Wolf Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 1:09 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! Now that's the Spirit! Just Divine. :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 10:23 AM
Whoa! You did not! What? Yes you did!
Wolf Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 1:09 PM
I see that you know the hiding place of the family jewels. lol. ~ gw
Kalita Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 5:20 AM
Love the rhythm, flow and the pun! Precise and strong! Great one.
Wolf Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 1:00 PM
A bullseye on this one hurts to even think about it. lol. Thanks for visiting my site, Silpika. Joy and Light, Gershon
Lawless Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 5:04 AM
...it used to be applied a bit lower and from a different direction...
Wolf Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 12:59 PM
Exactly the point... Thanks, John.
Kavanagh  Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 2:18 AM
Nice work here Mr Wolf, A stinging reality couplet if ever there was one. Cheers David
Wolf Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 12:54 PM
Thanks, David. I like how used the term 'stinging' in your comment. Cheers, Gershon
Bush Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 5:00 PM
HA! Short & snappy.
Wolf Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 7:32 PM
HA! You know what rhymes with 'snappy' -- cra -- oops, Happy! Joy Forever, Gershon
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 3:45 PM
good one GW:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 7:31 PM
Hey, thank you Jan! Cheers, Gershon
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