Loaded On the Tip of Your Tongue

The bullet is loaded 
On the tip of your tongue
You pull the trigger 
Your words are on the run
Headed for my wounded heart
Just one more moment
And your work will be done
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 17, 2011 at 1:45 PM
Thank you for sharing your creative poetry with us Brian. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol
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