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Lo the Days of Doubt Destroy

Lo the Days of Doubt Destroy Lo the days of doubt destroy those dreams I built but failed deploy O’er changing winds and curses flew the starlit night a crimson hue Perchance my dubbins upside down? where death was dealt, has now been found Three crows now perch upon the cross that bears my name where doubt was lost

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/26/2013 8:41:00 AM
This is awesome, Jimbo. I love the brevity. It's a true testament to a poet's talent to be able to say so much in so few lines. Loved this poem; excellent job :)
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Date: 11/16/2010 5:47:00 AM
Converted once, converted again ... this is not just inspiration, it is anointed inspiration. Love you, Jimmy.
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Date: 11/10/2010 5:31:00 PM
so good! just drips off the tongue I love it! I've missed your writing!!! Light & Love and welcome home!
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Date: 11/7/2010 9:53:00 AM
Smile ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'My Dear Friend, James Goff,' Amid The Colourful Shadows Thus Given This, Rainbows Draped Cross; 'Everlastings, Beautiful Love;' Bye My Friend!":) ~
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Date: 11/7/2010 9:45:00 AM
Smile ~ "Where doubt was lost!" ~ What a very passion laced poe "My 'Dear, Gifted & Precious Friend James Marshall Goff!!!'" ~ Makes myself consider not only "Christ The Messiah," the Martyrs but also, Stephanus; "Exceptionally Beautiful; A Fave!!!" ~ I hope that life is treating "Your Brightness" perfectly my friend &, "Thank You" for "Your" kind com; much appreciated ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 11/6/2010 2:48:00 AM
I suspect that these crows are Belief, Hope & Love.) Delighted.
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Date: 11/5/2010 8:08:00 AM
Many people have dreams they fail to "deploy" or pursue. We best make haste and work toward our goals now while we can, Jimbo. You have me thinking...and that can be dangerous. Smiles. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/5/2010 7:09:00 AM
Thanks for your comments on my poem Diwali. Please share my blogs on Diwali festival,James. Jimbo
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Date: 11/4/2010 10:42:00 PM
Hey, james, what are dubbins? This poem is quite interesting. In a way , this kind of reminds me of the sonnet I just posted. Very atmospheric! The last line makes me believe maybe something good happend (if doubt was lost? That is a good thing, right?) Thanks for commenting to me today. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/4/2010 7:12:00 PM
Intense and intriguing write Jimbo .. interesting couplet and wonderful language my friend.. thankxx for your sweet comments tonight luv..
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Date: 11/4/2010 4:43:00 PM
Interesting thoughts penned..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..I am glad that you lost your doubts..I am glad that you chose to comment on my work this eve..Sara
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Date: 11/4/2010 7:02:00 AM
Nice sentiments you have penned well in this write, James
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Date: 11/3/2010 10:48:00 PM
stirring piece of an enchanting couplet... well done, james.. warmest, nette
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Date: 11/3/2010 2:36:00 PM
Indeed, a simliar revelation....my friend. How doubt can haunt and keep us bound...it is a lesson to know it is not worth the price of holding the simple truth from those we love. Excellent poem, James.
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