Lizard {haiku}

suddenly appears scampers quickly over rock skittish little guy

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Date: 8/17/2008 1:22:00 PM

I got a chuckle out of this one. Thanks for the day brightener. Nice use of alliteration. Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 8/7/2008 12:25:00 AM

Like the tempo in this one Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/19/2008 6:17:00 AM

I am not a lizard person and your poem makes me glad I do not live near them. LOL. Sorry Michael! Excellent haiku. Love, Shar

Katherine Stella

Date: 7/19/2008 5:16:00 AM

lol you painted a great scene Mike and boy do they ever skittish lol thanks for sharing dear friend jenny sends her love to you and family

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 7/19/2008 3:51:00 AM

Skittish indeed, my boys sure love to try to catch them critters! heehee, good thing I'm not too skittish - with 4 boys, how can I be! Love Kristin

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/18/2008 7:54:00 PM

I like this one, Michael. We have these little creatures all over our property, and they are exactly as you described in very few words. Nice poem!...Carrie

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 7/18/2008 5:08:00 PM

Perfect form here, Michael and so very descriptive that I could see it now. Very well done! Michael

James Foulk

Date: 7/18/2008 3:36:00 PM

really enjoyed this one michael a great well wrote Haiku.