Lizard {haiku}

suddenly appears
scampers quickly over rock
skittish little guy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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August 17, 2008 at 1:22 PM
I got a chuckle out of this one. Thanks for the day brightener. Nice use of alliteration. Karen
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August 7, 2008 at 12:25 AM
Like the tempo in this one Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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July 19, 2008 at 6:17 AM
I am not a lizard person and your poem makes me glad I do not live near them. LOL. Sorry Michael! Excellent haiku. Love, Shar
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July 19, 2008 at 5:16 AM
lol you painted a great scene Mike and boy do they ever skittish lol thanks for sharing dear friend jenny sends her love to you and family
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July 19, 2008 at 3:51 AM
Skittish indeed, my boys sure love to try to catch them critters! heehee, good thing I'm not too skittish - with 4 boys, how can I be! Love Kristin
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July 18, 2008 at 7:54 PM
I like this one, Michael. We have these little creatures all over our property, and they are exactly as you described in very few words. Nice poem!...Carrie
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July 18, 2008 at 5:08 PM
Perfect form here, Michael and so very descriptive that I could see it now. Very well done! Michael
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July 18, 2008 at 3:36 PM
really enjoyed this one michael a great well wrote Haiku.
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