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Years ago I met an assured, self-sufficient, powerful, oddly friendly man that frightened me. I put away my ill-gut-feelings and believed he was what he said he was. We did an odd dance around, we did, a come-here/go-away sashay. As time passed as often happens I learned that he was not what he seemed, for in his belligerent-breath’d mouth hid a tongue riddled with deceit and conceit. Ultimately his boomer voice revealed a blue and orange lizard sunning on sandstone rocks, a bow tie at its scaly neck, expensive shoes on its four feet, dis-ease in its bite, fame and ego driving the discourse, leaving bloody disasters in its wake, adding pleasure to the feeding before passing on to other victims - including me. I survived by hiding among the dead, pulling myself through the slippery in the moon night, hiding in obscure places until I escaped. What did I learn? Never trust lizards that wear bowties. © Jack Jordan, 2013

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Date: 3/21/2013 5:54:00 PM
what a great analogy poem, Jack. Great final lines and cleverness throughout!!
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Date: 3/21/2013 5:54:00 PM
who was it? Could have been one of those guys my hubbie built houses for years ago and got screwed out of ALL his money.
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Date: 3/21/2013 9:48:00 PM
Possibly so. It's an amalgam of dozens of "professionals" I knew in graduate school and the following 34 years in universities. I don't harbor bitter feelings. Oh no, not me... My condolences to your husband.
Date: 3/19/2013 12:44:00 AM
Last two lines were perfection. Not only is it a funny image, but a great euphemism for "sly" people that make themselves look "big and important" with petty things like bow-ties. The part about "hiding among the dead" was also intriguing... I wonder how insecure you'd have to feel to place yourself among the dead? Good work...
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Date: 3/19/2013 8:58:00 AM
Horribly insecure. I've read and heard that similar events took place during the Civil War, the concentration camps of WWll, the trenches of WWl...
Date: 3/18/2013 6:04:00 AM
Indeed lizards in bowties should not be trusted..ha...Great read here, Jack. I enjoyed it!
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Date: 3/18/2013 8:23:00 AM
Especially those with pink and green stripes. Jack
Date: 3/16/2013 5:40:00 PM
I've known a few of those! interesting poem, and somehow I read deeper meaning into it, shades of david icke...
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Date: 3/16/2013 5:53:00 PM
I too have known more than one. I didn't know about Icke, so I googled him. I didn't write the poem with him in mind at all, but it certainly seems to fit. Jack
Date: 3/16/2013 4:00:00 PM
Awesome poem Jack....Donna
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Date: 3/16/2013 4:05:00 PM
Thanks! It was fun to write. Jack
Date: 3/16/2013 11:22:00 AM
Awesome poem! I had a good old chuckle about the bowtie bit thou.
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Date: 3/16/2013 1:28:00 PM
Thanks... The ending can be read either way; funny is good. Jack

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