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Liz Tb

passionate kiss I gave Miss Liz brought bliss to heart 3rd placement written 26/11/2020 Charles Messina ‘Than-Bauk Me’ poetry contest

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/7/2020 2:50:00 PM

Very romantic:-) many congrats on your win Krish:-) hugs Jan xx

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/7/2020 9:39:00 PM

Thank you Jan! hugs to you! Krish

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/5/2020 9:22:00 PM

Very romantic, Krish! Congratulations on your winning "kiss."

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/5/2020 11:39:00 PM

Thanks Sam! ha,ha, Indeed!!:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/5/2020 3:44:00 AM

Congrats on your placement in the contest. Sara

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/5/2020 4:51:00 AM

Thanks Sara! Pleased my kiss brought poetic bliss!

Eve Roper

Date: 12/4/2020 8:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/5/2020 4:52:00 AM

Eve Thanks very much! a new format from Charlie! short and sweet!

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 12/4/2020 7:03:00 PM

This Than-Bauk form is short and sweet... Yours is a beautiful entry Krishji. Congrats on your win. Have a great weekend! ~ Ani

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/5/2020 4:53:00 AM

Thanks Ani! Good of you to visit! congrats on your win too!

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/4/2020 2:59:00 PM

Hi Krish, You expressed much passion in a few words. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/5/2020 4:54:00 AM

Thanks Alexis! Pleased to have your visit!!

Charles Messina

Date: 12/4/2020 12:59:00 PM

Nice entry, Krish. You romantic devil you (lol) I like it! Congratulations on your win my friend. Stay well.. Charlie

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/4/2020 2:03:00 PM

Thanks Charles! pleased you liked! never too old to fall in love!!:)

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/27/2020 7:57:00 PM

not familiar with this form, but like the content... short, but makes a statement well :) hugs

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/28/2020 12:05:00 AM

Thanks Sandra! just 12 syllables!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/26/2020 5:23:00 PM

Lovely and innocent.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/26/2020 9:34:00 PM

Thanks Caren!