Liz Tb

passionate kiss
I gave Miss Liz
brought bliss to heart


3rd placement
written 26/11/2020
Charles Messina
‘Than-Bauk Me’ poetry contest

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Date: 12/7/2020 2:50:00 PM
Very romantic:-) many congrats on your win Krish:-) hugs Jan xx
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/7/2020 9:39:00 PM
Thank you Jan! hugs to you! Krish
Date: 12/5/2020 9:22:00 PM
Very romantic, Krish! Congratulations on your winning "kiss."
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/5/2020 11:39:00 PM
Thanks Sam! ha,ha, Indeed!!:)
Date: 12/5/2020 3:44:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest. Sara
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/5/2020 4:51:00 AM
Thanks Sara! Pleased my kiss brought poetic bliss!
Date: 12/4/2020 8:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/5/2020 4:52:00 AM
Eve Thanks very much! a new format from Charlie! short and sweet!
Date: 12/4/2020 7:03:00 PM
This Than-Bauk form is short and sweet... Yours is a beautiful entry Krishji. Congrats on your win. Have a great weekend! ~ Ani
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/5/2020 4:53:00 AM
Thanks Ani! Good of you to visit! congrats on your win too!
Date: 12/4/2020 2:59:00 PM
Hi Krish, You expressed much passion in a few words. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/5/2020 4:54:00 AM
Thanks Alexis! Pleased to have your visit!!
Date: 12/4/2020 12:59:00 PM
Nice entry, Krish. You romantic devil you (lol) I like it! Congratulations on your win my friend. Stay well.. Charlie
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/4/2020 2:03:00 PM
Thanks Charles! pleased you liked! never too old to fall in love!!:)
Date: 11/27/2020 7:57:00 PM
not familiar with this form, but like the content... short, but makes a statement well :) hugs
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/28/2020 12:05:00 AM
Thanks Sandra! just 12 syllables!
Date: 11/26/2020 5:23:00 PM
Lovely and innocent.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/26/2020 9:34:00 PM
Thanks Caren!
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