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Liz Tb

passionate kiss
I gave Miss Liz
brought bliss to heart


3rd placement
written 26/11/2020
Charles Messina
‘Than-Bauk Me’ poetry contest

11th grade12th gradeblessingthan-bauk

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Jan Allison

December 7, 2020 at 2:50 PM

Very romantic:-) many congrats on your win Krish:-) hugs Jan xx

Krish Radhakrishna

December 7, 2020 at 9:39 PM

Thank you Jan! hugs to you! Krish

Sam Kauffman

December 5, 2020 at 9:22 PM

Very romantic, Krish! Congratulations on your winning "kiss."

Krish Radhakrishna

December 5, 2020 at 11:39 PM

Thanks Sam! ha,ha, Indeed!!:)

Sara Kendrick

December 5, 2020 at 3:44 AM

Congrats on your placement in the contest. Sara

Krish Radhakrishna

December 5, 2020 at 4:51 AM

Thanks Sara! Pleased my kiss brought poetic bliss!

Eve Roper

December 4, 2020 at 8:46 PM

Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve

Krish Radhakrishna

December 5, 2020 at 4:52 AM

Eve Thanks very much! a new format from Charlie! short and sweet!

Anitha Jayasankar

December 4, 2020 at 7:03 PM

This Than-Bauk form is short and sweet... Yours is a beautiful entry Krishji. Congrats on your win. Have a great weekend! ~ Ani

Krish Radhakrishna

December 5, 2020 at 4:53 AM

Thanks Ani! Good of you to visit! congrats on your win too!

Alexis Y.

December 4, 2020 at 2:59 PM

Hi Krish, You expressed much passion in a few words. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Krish Radhakrishna

December 5, 2020 at 4:54 AM

Thanks Alexis! Pleased to have your visit!!

Charles Messina

December 4, 2020 at 12:59 PM

Nice entry, Krish. You romantic devil you (lol) I like it! Congratulations on your win my friend. Stay well.. Charlie

Krish Radhakrishna

December 4, 2020 at 2:03 PM

Thanks Charles! pleased you liked! never too old to fall in love!!:)

Sandra Adams

November 27, 2020 at 7:57 PM

not familiar with this form, but like the content... short, but makes a statement well :) hugs

Krish Radhakrishna

November 28, 2020 at 12:05 AM

Thanks Sandra! just 12 syllables!

Caren Krutsinger

November 26, 2020 at 5:23 PM

Lovely and innocent.

Krish Radhakrishna

November 26, 2020 at 9:34 PM

Thanks Caren!

Liz Tb

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