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Frolics through a meadow of purpled peonies effected their teetering and releases their scents in a youth who whimsically crosses, A dried sprig plucked up became moistened in a streaming murky river prompted by enthusiastic hands that dipped it in while passing, Sun scatters shadows cleared for unveiled sights toward witnessing excellence at its most helpful for a pleasurable viewing, A barking dog by a white picket fence faces the fearless generates a memorable smile for a changed threatening sound turns to aired lapping, Worn out shoes draped under a pair of dirty socks air out near unkempt clothes bundled high close to a bed where a hyperactive sleep. ***I purposely made it a gender-neutral muse, as this affliction is of a broader spectrum. It was thought to myself, at that time, but seemingly, it lacked specificity, hence my note and resubmission. Date: 08/24/2019

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Date: 8/24/2019 2:38:00 PM
Hello William Kekaula,it must be scary to live a life like this. Is there medication for ADD? Is there a way to control it? Just wondering. Aloha! Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/25/2019 8:06:00 PM
William I am glad that you are getting yje help that you need. Aloha Da\rlene
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/24/2019 2:42:00 PM
There are medications, as well as, counseling, that helps, ~ Aloha William

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