Living Under the Weight of a Label

The blind leading the blind, what is seen is how its heard
the thoughts that make the story are lost behind the words
do you see it as you view it, or take a deeper look 
do you read into the narrative or judge the cover of the book

Is the figure cold and dirty, the shell of what he's made 
or the unforgiven soul, that is waiting to be saved
does that body clad so poorly hold more than what is shown 
or just another mannequin, that has reaped just what was sown

Did you spare a dollar this morning or was your vision blind
or was that lonesome beggar just in the shadows of your mind 
you see that youth with his hooded clothes and jeans hung round his waist 
could he be a high school scholar or does his style not suit your taste 

That girl there, with the pushchair, yes she has a name 
does she love the child she carried, or did she play a foolish game 
And that solemn face behind the bars,the prisoner to his crime
Or the broken life held captive and the victim of a lie

That woman in the wheelchair, animated by expression
does she really have no hopes and dreams or are you too deaf to listen
that classy car, the modest tie, the briefcase at his side
is there a dark deceitful truth, buried deep beneath his pride

no life ahead with a dead end job, shoveling gruel from a grease filled tray
or the maturing child of a broken home, paying bills 'mum' couldn't pay
two babies need to find new homes, is it proof she couldn't cope
or could she not make the perfect life so instead she gave them hope

So they live on a rough estate, they're deviant thieving 'yobs'
and see their buttoned shirts and ties, they're private school 'snobs'
do you just see flecks of peeling paint, view this canvas as a whole 
or define each stroke of the artists brush that reach right to the soul

If opportunity played a fairer game and made judgement realise
then possibility could do its part, allow wisdom to remove disguise
yet with judgement passed and truth unseen, realisation is unable
to protect our children and ourselves 'living under the weight of a label'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/15/2015 10:54:00 AM
Melanie, Congratulations on the win. *Skat *
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Date: 2/5/2015 3:54:00 AM
Melanie Congrats on win. Love>>>>rajat
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Date: 2/4/2015 12:23:00 PM
wonderful wise words with a great message - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/21/2014 11:09:00 AM
Wow! Insightful and a great message...I think you've just explained why Jesus said, ' "Judge not..." Well done! You covered all of the bases and definitely deserve a first place win.
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Date: 1/20/2014 12:01:00 AM
Wonderful poem! Congrats on the win! Loved this contest
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Date: 1/19/2014 2:54:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Melanie -- ARCHANA
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Date: 1/18/2014 7:36:00 PM
So true. None of us can know just what someone else is going through. Nicely penned, Melanie. Congrats!
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Date: 1/18/2014 5:08:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, Melanie
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Date: 1/18/2014 3:44:00 PM
Exceptional work, congratulations.
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Date: 1/18/2014 2:40:00 PM
Melanie, excellent poem. Well thought out, filled with imagery, with a good strong message, and good form. Congratulations on your win. Thanks much for entering my contest.
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Melanie Jennings
Date: 1/4/2015 1:57:00 AM
Thank you, i have literally only just seen all these comments :/ only a year late lol ... thank you
Date: 1/5/2014 7:36:00 PM
I think your poem is not only well written but a very important one, if only people would take in board what you are saying. I would love to see this. great poem framed and hung on every school wall and read in class, then maybe we can start to change things,well done. best wishes. Pete.
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