Bl Devnath Poet Verse

Living Thinking

i am alive
                                            living thinking
                                     about us the human beings
                                what we are now what we should be 
                              Our God gifted world is so much beautiful 
                           that in many ways I have been missing till date
                 i am so poor in thoughts that i can’t feel the world’s celestiality 
                        with my limited knowledge and all the means I have
                                   i think and think all about this 
                                      very deeply in the moment                                              
                                             when i feel alive
                                               living thinking



For Contest: Sponsored by PD
Written on 28th December 2014

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Donna Jones March 7, 2015 at 9:01 AM Wonderful job....congratulations Bl Devnath March 7, 2015 at 10:06 AM Thanks a lot for wishing me congrats. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Skat A February 19, 2015 at 6:09 PM BL, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win **SKAT** Bl Devnath February 20, 2015 at 7:37 AM Many thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always,bl

Eve Roper February 19, 2015 at 6:07 PM BL Devnath, wonderful write, about our life and taking a moment to relize there is a wonderful world out there and we need to enjoy at the moment. 7 Congratulations on your winning poem. Blessings eve

Jan Allison February 19, 2015 at 9:57 AM Beautifully penned BL many congrats- i love the form you used for this:-) Hugs Jan xx Bl Devnath February 19, 2015 at 11:39 AM Thanks for your wishes, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Poet Destroyer A February 19, 2015 at 9:28 AM Your poem's amazing BL........... Love the feeling and moment of your thoughts... BL, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "This Very Moment" if you'd like. Wishing you a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA Bl Devnath February 19, 2015 at 11:42 AM Thanks a lot my *friend for giving me a great credit on my poem and for wishing me congratulation. i love world wide heart and mind always. You are that surely. Loved always,bl

Andrea Dietrich December 29, 2014 at 3:25 PM this is a great poem for that contest. I hope to see it on her winners' list. Bl Devnath December 29, 2014 at 11:44 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your expectation and for saying it as a great poem. Wish you Happy New Year 2015 to you and your family. Loved always,bl