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Living On Hope

I love someone who I wish loved me. But this one way window won't let me see. If she would even let me in. Long enough for love to win. It's been a very long long time. I've just been filling up with rhyme. Waiting just to let her know. How my love can only grow. Some where in this universe. An entity has removed the curse. And hope has filled this heart of mine. Telling me some how it will be fine. She's the answer to that very prayer. I said to Jesus as I sat there. Asking him to be with me. So inside my heart, he could see. I really shouldn't be surprised. He saw the dream that I devised. And brought to life a fantasy. That you were made just for me. Some may say I'm old and foolish. But I prayed, I didn't wish. And here you came into my life. I truly hope you'll be my wife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/14/2018 6:56:00 PM
wow, Robert, I hope this goes beyond fiction. You deserve only the best. A very nice positive poem this is! Thanks also for seeing several of my poems recently. Let me see if your other most recent post I have seen yet.
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Date: 6/11/2018 1:01:00 AM
Nicely wrapped up, Robert. I hope it worked! -Cary
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Date: 5/15/2018 11:59:00 PM
A wise man once said... “All we get is love that’s spurned, and life just seems so strange” ;-) The one way window is such a true analogy ... we have a constant noisy commentary on our own thoughts and so little feedback on everyone elses’s! Sweet poem Robert :-)
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Date: 5/6/2018 12:16:00 AM
Omg, this poem is beautiful. I love it!
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Leslie Albright
Date: 5/6/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Shawn. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Date: 5/5/2018 8:51:00 PM
A wonderful write, Robert!
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Leslie Albright
Date: 5/5/2018 10:26:00 PM
Thank You Kim. It's alright. :):):)