T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet Poet Rhyme

Living In the Deep Blue Sea

LIVING IN THE DEEP BLUE SEA

Sparkling sea with water so blue.
Swimming with fish,sharks,whales.
For dinner we eat seaweed and kale.
All my friends live here too.

A mermaid that lives in the water.
Arieal what a beautiful name.
Deep in the sea there's no fire or flame.
She's the king of the sea's daughter.

We have one thing in common"red hair".
Ocean living is a great place to be.
Life is wonderful in the deep blue sea.
We both are about loving and being fair.

I love to fish and she is a fish.
Jelly fish,clown fish and a sea horse.
Out of water things couldn't get worse.
If things got that bad she'ld make a wish.

She has a cartoon,movie and a book.
A special mermaid that children love.
Lives under the ocean and not above.
If you tried you can't catch her on a hook.
                      Teresa Skyles
Entered in Linda Marie's"Disney"contest.

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Sara Kendrick August 18, 2011 at 8:48 AM Congrats on your win in the Disney Contest..Sara

Ralph Taylor August 16, 2011 at 9:06 PM Congrats on your win, Teresa. Nice going. xxxRalph

Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 16, 2011 at 11:50 AM How cool is that? We both picked the same movie :) Isn't Ariel just amazing, she sure is one courageous girl :) and that's so cool as well that you both have red hair :) Enjoyed reading this and Super congrats on your win! And you're very welcome, always happy to help-- so happy to see you in winners' lists :D

Carol Sunshine Brown August 16, 2011 at 8:31 AM Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Disney" contest Teresa. Love, Carol

David Williams August 16, 2011 at 3:09 AM hey Teresa congrast on your win David

John Freeman August 15, 2011 at 10:38 PM Teresa, lovely piece. Great to see your worthy poem honored a third place. Way to Go! Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 15, 2011 at 7:31 PM Congrats Teresa on third place win in my contest.. excellent write luv..

Andrea Dietrich August 12, 2011 at 10:06 PM I love that character too. Her name is Ariel, right? It was one of the names I had picked out if I had another daughter. A beautiful name and this is a nice tribute to her in the contest. Luv, Andrea PS is your hair long like hers too?

Dr.Ram Mehta July 29, 2011 at 9:21 PM Very interesting and engrossing write on the mermaid

Carolyn Devonshire July 29, 2011 at 7:17 PM Aw, I didn't see the Little Mermaid, Teresa, but I love the way you describe her life. Perhaps in my next life, I'll return as a mermaid -- or even a fish! Best wishes in the contest with this delightful poem, Teresa! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown July 29, 2011 at 8:06 AM Your poetry is very interesting and holds the readers attention from start to finish Teresa. Have a splendid weekend and I will return to read more of your writing soon. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick July 28, 2011 at 7:02 PM Good luck in the contest with this very creative work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara