Living In Longing

you are the water
when i want to drownd
you make me happy
but now your not around
and i am bleeding 
tears of sarrow down
i feel i'm dieing
from the inside out
my heart has melted 
and my souls decaide
destined to suffer 
for mistakes i've made
living in longing
my mind lingers on 
missing you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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December 24, 2010 at 5:08 AM
Lots of misspelled words but the content is indeed grand. I can most definitely relate to this.
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