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Living As Invisible

Walking through the pedestrian of  crowd You were shackled by your own cloud You went to a surprise party which never held for you You are the list beyond the overview You are not a harm person, not the nice one either You are just one creature who deserve to live better All that you want just one love But still you forsaken by none love Sometimes questions were left you in wonder Where were those people who ever hold the past fever People who used to be your wing man, but now acted like a new comer Clustered in innocent mind, but well.. That's not a new bummer You walked searching for a trace line Head's down unsteadily lost your own shine You see people, while people may not see you You become a vague as wind which never be seen but blew

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/18/2013 5:59:00 AM
A very fitting read for me today....this is an excellent write!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/18/2013 7:38:00 AM
Thank you Mark :) Pleasured to have you here :D
Date: 1/17/2013 6:20:00 AM
You amaze me Yanny, simply delightful write. You have a whimsical way of expressing your thoughts. I appreciate your spirit.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/17/2013 9:28:00 AM
Thank you Rick, :D good luck for your book, all the best Rick :D - hug, yanny
Date: 1/16/2013 7:00:00 AM
This is a wonderful rhyme Yanny, love it xx
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/16/2013 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Mandy :D really glad that you like it :) wishing you a great day there :D - hig, yanny

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