Living As Invisible

Walking through the pedestrian of  crowd
You were shackled by your own cloud
You went to a surprise party which never held for you
You are the list beyond the overview

You are not a harm person, not the nice one either
You are just one creature who deserve to live better
All that you want just one love
But still you forsaken by none love

Sometimes questions were left you in wonder
Where were those people who ever hold the past fever
People who used to be your wing man, but now acted like a new comer
Clustered in innocent mind, but well.. That's not a new bummer

You walked searching for a trace line
Head's down unsteadily lost your own shine
You see people, while people may not see you
You become a vague as wind which never be seen but blew
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Cotterman Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 5:59 AM
A very fitting read for me today....this is an excellent write!
Widjanarko Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 7:38 AM
Thank you Mark :) Pleasured to have you here :D
Lamoureux Avatar
January 17, 2013 at 6:20 AM
You amaze me Yanny, simply delightful write. You have a whimsical way of expressing your thoughts. I appreciate your spirit.
Widjanarko Avatar
January 17, 2013 at 9:28 AM
Thank you Rick, :D good luck for your book, all the best Rick :D - hug, yanny
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 7:00 AM
This is a wonderful rhyme Yanny, love it xx
Widjanarko Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 7:50 AM
Thank you Mandy :D really glad that you like it :) wishing you a great day there :D - hig, yanny
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