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poem submittedto"Charlieku-2" poetry contest, Charles Messina, sponsor, October 8, 2026

Living a Dream-Still Blue (CharlieKu)

We found the lost bridge 
none could find it 
by daylight 
at last 
there 

You spoke my old name 
as if returned 
from somewhere 
forgot 
years

I woke before dawn 
you crossed over
the river
still blue
gone
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