Livin'

Just haps
all the yaps 'bout it
don't count for much when
it's over.

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M.I.A .

November 30, 2011 at 9:26 PM

this side of you that i found very appealing!

Tim B

November 30, 2011 at 6:53 PM

Then we might as well be the living dead? Brains!! :) Cut to the chase Mrs. Nancy. Perhaps it'll count if we add things up! Or perhaps we could just be count's?

Nancy Jones

November 30, 2011 at 7:01 PM

am pretty sure I spelled Sysiphus wrong.

Nancy Jones

November 30, 2011 at 6:59 PM

see my comment to Joe Maverick's comment and have you ever read Camus' "Myth of Sysiphus?"

Elizabeth Wesley

November 30, 2011 at 6:22 PM

Always unique, always to the point, always leaves me thinking! Luv, Lizzie

Joe Maverick

November 30, 2011 at 12:16 AM

I say whatever your view about life" we still have to live it..? so while we're hear lets get free from fear, and to enlightenment" offer all we have to give it:) enjoyed the write today Nancy...

Nancy Jones

November 30, 2011 at 6:14 PM

or get to live it, if we decide to. freedom from fear make the decision easy, thanks for the comment, Joe, always preeshed ~N