lives roaring aflame

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This is a Collum Lune Haiku ~

lives roaring aflame
loss amidst cinders of california
they shall rise

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/12/2025 7:56:00 PM

Be it in California or Arizona, the 'phoenix' always rises. This time too. Positivity, Gershon

Regina Elliott
Date: 1/13/2025 3:45:00 AM

Love your uplifting comment, Gershon. The people will prevail. Blessings of the New Year to you. Shalom :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/12/2025 6:56:00 AM

- A dreadful fire, Regina ...greatly written - hugs

Regina Elliott
Date: 1/13/2025 3:49:00 AM

Hello Anne-Lise, thank you for taking the time to read my poem. The fire victims will rise. Prayers for California. Have a creative & inspirational week. Hugs xox

Tom Woody

Date: 1/11/2025 2:48:00 PM

Always the need to rise... so sad. Time is coming when natural disasters will no longer plague our planet

Regina Elliott
Date: 1/12/2025 3:14:00 AM

Thank you, Tom, for reading my poem. Such devastation but the people will unite I think. Blessings to California. ~