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This is a Collum Lune Haiku ~

lives roaring aflame

lives roaring aflame
loss amidst cinders of california
they shall rise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 7:56 PM
Be it in California or Arizona, the 'phoenix' always rises. This time too. Positivity, Gershon
Elliott Avatar
January 13, 2025 at 3:45 AM
Love your uplifting comment, Gershon. The people will prevail. Blessings of the New Year to you. Shalom :)
Andresen Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 6:56 AM
- A dreadful fire, Regina ...greatly written - hugs
Elliott Avatar
January 13, 2025 at 3:49 AM
Hello Anne-Lise, thank you for taking the time to read my poem. The fire victims will rise. Prayers for California. Have a creative & inspirational week. Hugs xox
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