Live Life Kingsize

LIVE LIFE KINGSIZE Life isn’t long So sing sweet song For bliss lifelong… Limit your wrong Strike the right gong Have faith all along Don’t be headstrong Let peace and love prolong When plenty problems throng Stay brave and strong With everyone, try to get along Smile share and care all daylong… Life then gifts to you a pleasant birdsong Bout of happiness in life’s swan song!
~23rd October 2016~ For Contest No 227 any form-theme max of 14 lines Sponsored by Brian Strand
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Kimathi Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 3:08 AM
What an awesome rhyme!!! Congrats Anulaxmi, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
Nayak Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 1:17 PM
Dear Teddy, thank you so very much :)glad you liked my rhyme:) thanks again//love,Anu:)
Dietrich Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 6:07 PM
This is very sweet, Anu. I enjoyed it.
Nayak Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 1:16 PM
Dear Andrea, thank you so very much :)glad you liked my poem:) thanks again//love,Anu:)
Canerdy Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 3:22 PM
A 7 for your LOVELY, winning poem, Anu! I especially like "Strike the right gong"! Janice
Nayak Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 1:16 PM
Dear Janice, thank you so very much for your pleasant visit and comment, glad you liked my poem:) you are very generous, thanks again//love,Anu:)
Sergi Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 7:28 AM
A beautiful poem as well as a philosophy, Anulaxmi. Let us all hope we live long enough to redeem ourselves.
Nayak Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 1:46 PM
Dear Ralph, thank you so very much for your pleasant visit and gracious comment, gladdened me:)yes...we can hope to live long, let live and redeem ourselves:)//love,Anu:)
Bocsa Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 3:12 PM
Wonderful life, hope, light and smiles. Only smiles. The wrinkles should be the place where once were but smiles. A poem grown up as a tree. Wonderful melody o rhyme: daylong/song/strong/prelong
Nayak Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 3:03 AM
Dear Ovidiu, your words and visit much appreciated:) happy you liked my write, thank you very much// love, Anu:)
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