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LIVE LIFE KINGSIZE Life isn’t long So sing sweet song For bliss lifelong… Limit your wrong Strike the right gong Have faith all along Don’t be headstrong Let peace and love prolong When plenty problems throng Stay brave and strong With everyone, try to get along Smile share and care all daylong… Life then gifts to you a pleasant birdsong Bout of happiness in life’s swan song!
~23rd October 2016~ For Contest No 227 any form-theme max of 14 lines Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 10/25/2016 3:08:00 AM
What an awesome rhyme!!! Congrats Anulaxmi, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 10/26/2016 1:17:00 PM
Dear Teddy, thank you so very much :)glad you liked my rhyme:) thanks again//love,Anu:)
Date: 10/24/2016 6:07:00 PM
This is very sweet, Anu. I enjoyed it.
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Date: 10/26/2016 1:16:00 PM
Dear Andrea, thank you so very much :)glad you liked my poem:) thanks again//love,Anu:)
Date: 10/24/2016 3:22:00 PM
A 7 for your LOVELY, winning poem, Anu! I especially like "Strike the right gong"! Janice
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 10/26/2016 1:16:00 PM
Dear Janice, thank you so very much for your pleasant visit and comment, glad you liked my poem:) you are very generous, thanks again//love,Anu:)
Date: 10/23/2016 7:28:00 AM
A beautiful poem as well as a philosophy, Anulaxmi. Let us all hope we live long enough to redeem ourselves.
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 10/24/2016 1:46:00 PM
Dear Ralph, thank you so very much for your pleasant visit and gracious comment, gladdened me:)yes...we can hope to live long, let live and redeem ourselves:)//love,Anu:)
Date: 10/22/2016 3:12:00 PM
Wonderful life, hope, light and smiles. Only smiles. The wrinkles should be the place where once were but smiles. A poem grown up as a tree. Wonderful melody o rhyme: daylong/song/strong/prelong
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 10/23/2016 3:03:00 AM
Dear Ovidiu, your words and visit much appreciated:) happy you liked my write, thank you very much// love, Anu:)