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Live Laugh Love

L ies my heart when I see you, I nimical gaze with intensity, V enue is my mind for the game, E cstasy fills me with your name, L aughter and shame, A rising emotions frame, make me lame, U mbrella missing in the rain, G et your wings and snatch me from pain, H ide me sweetheart in devil's lane L ay me down, don't mourn in vain, O ffer yourself and your mane, V oices wanting your bane, E clipse the moon, fly away like a vane.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/27/2010 2:13:00 PM
Sounds like LOVE!! (yes I am U.S.) HAve you ever been there? Nice seeing you today. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/29/2010 11:57:00 AM
thankxxx for letting me know about your name.. and see its corrected now... good job.. great name... u should enter it in the name contest posted ..write a poem on your name.. is unusual... or a nick name if so...and submit it to Constance's contest.. good luck.. u have the power in your pen...with luv..
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Date: 7/15/2010 5:26:00 AM
This poem makes me want to be whisked away to love! Good luck in the contest. (Soup Mail) Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 7/14/2010 4:04:00 PM
Hey I like this and a nice entry for Tirzah's contest.. good luck ..with this great entry.. with luv..
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