Live It To You

live it to you, where I had to
i'm giving up you, and i have to
to make you feel, it was worth it

did i did wrong,when i had bad
the last love,treat it as crush
did you miss it,everlasting

should it be this,change it for me
i really want to,touch your body
put my lips on,tell me when you ready

we have done this,one last thing
they will never, trust us sorry
send your love too,where you have to

live it to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 10:38 PM
I think you got a typo on the last line. You meant...leave it to me
Vaidya Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 5:04 AM
Really appreciate you notice it, but its not type mistake, i was really trying to mess with people, using similar sounding words, I was trying to capture it as-i wannna be with you or living for you and you live for me, live it to you and live it to me. thanks a lot for your judgement, hope you like it :).
A  Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 6:12 PM
good poem, Ankit... skat
Vaidya Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 5:04 AM
thankyou skat :)
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