Live From the Newest Tarpit.

Where brackish liquid
strangles pristine innocence.
Once I even flew.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 3:54 PM
Hey, this was divinely done. NO win??? Yup, Korea was MY dad's war too! LUv, andrea
Kendrick Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 2:29 PM
Great write about the picture and what is on the news...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 12:16 PM
soo true!!
A   Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 5:06 PM
well done enjoyed the write and the haiku,..p.d.
Cwiak Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 8:16 AM
Right on! Dan C
Green Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 3:54 PM
Dang, sad... great job on the haiku.
Haick Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 3:48 PM
Excellent Gerard! How are you? Hope you've been well...Good luck in the contest...Peace, love, audrey
Culverhouse Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 12:39 PM
The tarpit has sprung a leak in the gulf of mexico, sadly.
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