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Live From the Newest Tarpit.

Where brackish liquid strangles pristine innocence. Once I even flew.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2010 3:54:00 PM

Hey, this was divinely done. NO win??? Yup, Korea was MY dad's war too! LUv, andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/20/2010 2:29:00 PM

Great write about the picture and what is on the news...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/20/2010 12:16:00 PM

soo true!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2010 5:06:00 PM

well done enjoyed the write and the haiku,..p.d.

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 5/14/2010 8:16:00 AM

Right on! Dan C

Amy Green

Date: 5/13/2010 3:54:00 PM

Dang, sad... great job on the haiku.

Audrey Haick

Date: 5/13/2010 3:48:00 PM

Excellent Gerard! How are you? Hope you've been well...Good luck in the contest...Peace, love, audrey

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/13/2010 12:39:00 PM

The tarpit has sprung a leak in the gulf of mexico, sadly.