Live a Life

Sometimes i wished i was never born, This life so empty and cruel. The thought of being left alone, Then feeling like a fool. Now put yourself in my shoes, And try to feel it too. The anger, hate and bitterness, That left me feeling blue. Now live a life without, The love of a parent. The sadness from within, So lonely but patient. So how long does it take, To slowly become detached. A year, two or three, Who really know's the fact's. Now you know how i felt, Throughout my entire life. That is of course before i met, The one my beautiful wife.
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Agustin Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 11:26 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 28, 2016 at 11:11 AM
CALUM, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love ** SKAT **
Mehta Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 8:25 PM
Good rhyming
Sweetheart Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 4:35 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all..as this delight tonight...luv.. Linda-Marie.."Sweetheart" of P.S.
Culverhouse Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 4:20 PM
enjoyed, hope you much happiness in the rest of your life, that is all we have.
Brown Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 3:14 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Calum. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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