Little Tree

Little tree pushing
skyward up through the dry dirt
wishing for water.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Henderson Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 8:06 PM
Very nice touch to this haiku. My favorite form. Drop the capital for a more subtle effect. gave you a 7 anywho. Soup mail
Mehta Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 3:10 PM
Nice picture painted with good images, betty
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 2:05 PM
ahhh, this is so cute!! Is it for wish contest too?
Brown Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 11:24 AM
I am sitting here reading some very amazing poems today Betty. I am glad yours was among them. Have a wonderful day full of love and joy. Love, Carol
Amadore Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 8:34 AM
Very successful and evocative haiku...well done.
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May 26, 2011 at 7:52 AM
Lovely little haiku.
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