Little Red

Little Red With jerking Twerking Bushy tail Jumps from The ground to The topmost rail Tiny little feet Slipping Gripping Birds scatter In fluttery fear Little Red is Getting near Copious amounts Of sunflower seed In the feeder built For the birds to feed Red will eat till he Can eat no more How much you ask I don't keep score I will just fill the Feeder with more

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/31/2017 5:23:00 PM

Yes go and feed the birds, they are hungry. I enjoyed your poem. Have a mnice evening my friend.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/30/2017 12:47:00 AM

I love this. So cute. I have one called RED :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/25/2016 5:02:00 PM

Such beautiful vivid imagery Janet you bring your garden to life:-) hugs jan xx

Janet Grace
Date: 11/26/2016 8:04:00 AM

We have a grey squirrel that visits too and I have written about him, will post at a later date. Thank you for the complimentary comment.

Chris Green

Date: 11/25/2016 2:44:00 PM

They should call them squirrel feeders because it seems to be one of their favorite places to eat. Very cute Janet.

Janet Grace
Date: 11/26/2016 8:07:00 AM

Some people put up squirrel guards. I don't. I like to feed anything that I see even if the seed is not free. It helps "make me complete," you see. (grin.)