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LITTLE PEOPLE a rustling outside? (just leaves in the breeze) snickering my shot of jack daniels gone! tiny burp giggle my daughter crying her tea set missing coffee spilled cat hisses footprints on my toast invisible? no very quick! strange - smoke out the chimney of her doll house

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Date: 5/31/2012 5:41:00 PM
A great set of haiku. i love to read yours.
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Date: 5/28/2012 3:35:00 PM
The work of the "Little People", for sure, Daver! Had your imagination sizzling, "smoke out the chimney"LOL Love this write, Daver!! Best wishes, Love, Mikki
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Date: 5/25/2012 4:07:00 PM
A well put piece here Daver, you can't leave those dolls alone for a moment..)
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Date: 5/24/2012 4:23:00 PM
hey did my running of the bowls at least put you in mind of running of the Bulls??
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Date: 5/24/2012 4:21:00 PM
you are so good at this type of haiku/senryu. I really love some of the ending lines you used . For the great juxtaposition.
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Date: 5/24/2012 4:02:00 AM
Love this write Dave ! Great imaginative write dear poet...or was it the "Jack" ! *smiles* Have a wonderful week my friend....much love, james
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Date: 5/23/2012 11:02:00 AM
You have to watch those little people--they are sneaky. Haaha...Tanya
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Date: 5/23/2012 7:41:00 AM
Cute and well done Daver! - oxox Anne-Lise
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