Danitra David Poet Acrostic

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Written for my beautiful, bright, kind girl Sarah. Mama loves you more than all of the ocean and sky combined!

Little Mysterious Girl

Something about her smile, the way it lights up her face
A quiet way about her; she treasures her personal space:
Reminds me of myself way, way back when 
A quiet one, all the while knowing, knowing women and men:
Her quiet observations, her inner mystery will not be solved easily

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Daver Austin February 2, 2015 at 11:05 AM Yes! The quiet girls are mysterious, but I've always thought the noisy ones were the most mysterious - covering up what's inside with verbosity. Enjoyed. Love, daver

Liam Mcdaid October 23, 2014 at 1:32 PM very beautifully painted piece

Maurice Yvonne October 20, 2014 at 5:47 PM Beautifully done, you are both lucky to have each other.

Dr.Ram Mehta September 30, 2014 at 10:05 AM Nicely done acrostic with feelings, Danitra Danitra David September 30, 2014 at 10:15 AM Thank you. I just started writing after wanting to for ages. I doodled long ago, mainly with rhyming verse. I don't know what I am doing...:) I appreciate this no hate policy :)