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Little Mysterious Girl

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Written for my beautiful, bright, kind girl Sarah. Mama loves you more than all of the ocean and sky combined!

Something about her smile, the way it lights up her face A quiet way about her; she treasures her personal space: Reminds me of myself way, way back when A quiet one, all the while knowing, knowing women and men: Her quiet observations, her inner mystery will not be solved easily

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Daver Austin

Date: 2/2/2015 11:05:00 AM

Yes! The quiet girls are mysterious, but I've always thought the noisy ones were the most mysterious - covering up what's inside with verbosity. Enjoyed. Love, daver

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/23/2014 1:32:00 PM

very beautifully painted piece

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/20/2014 5:47:00 PM

Beautifully done, you are both lucky to have each other.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/30/2014 10:05:00 AM

Nicely done acrostic with feelings, Danitra

Danitra David
Date: 9/30/2014 10:15:00 AM

Thank you. I just started writing after wanting to for ages. I doodled long ago, mainly with rhyming verse. I don't know what I am doing...:) I appreciate this no hate policy :)