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Written for my beautiful, bright, kind girl Sarah. Mama loves you more than all of the ocean and sky combined!

Something about her smile, the way it lights up her face A quiet way about her; she treasures her personal space: Reminds me of myself way, way back when A quiet one, all the while knowing, knowing women and men: Her quiet observations, her inner mystery will not be solved easily

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/2/2015 11:05:00 AM
Yes! The quiet girls are mysterious, but I've always thought the noisy ones were the most mysterious - covering up what's inside with verbosity. Enjoyed. Love, daver
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Date: 10/23/2014 1:32:00 PM
very beautifully painted piece
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Date: 10/20/2014 5:47:00 PM
Beautifully done, you are both lucky to have each other.
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Date: 9/30/2014 10:05:00 AM
Nicely done acrostic with feelings, Danitra
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Date: 9/30/2014 10:15:00 AM
Thank you. I just started writing after wanting to for ages. I doodled long ago, mainly with rhyming verse. I don't know what I am doing...:) I appreciate this no hate policy :)

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