Little Man

I grew up/ being alone
Had no friends/ not one of my own
I asked Momma when's Daddy coming home

She stood there silent/ tears in her eyes
Memories before he left for the sky
I knew my Daddy wasn't gonna come back home

(PreChorus1)
But everynight before I'd go to sleep
I'd pray a little prayer
And everytime I'd hear my Daddy saying,"Son, don't be scared."

Chorus:
You're gonna be alright
Mind your mom, live life on
I'll be just fine
When you close your eyes
Know that I'm loving you
One day will come
When you'll have a son 
Just as wonderful as you
But for now, be proud, cause you're my little man

As years went on / Time flew by
My son grew up/ right before my eyes
He asked me "Daddy, will you always be with me?"

I stood there silent/ tears in my eye
Memories of when he came from the sky
"Son, I'll always be here for you"

(Pre-Chorus2)
I know sometimes he wondered 
I know how much he cared
I always told him as much as I could
Son, don't be scared.

Repeat ChorusX1


Interlude
Just as my Dad told me
As I told my son
I heard my little man 
tell his little one

Repeat ChorusX1

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/18/2011 12:33:00 PM
yes this one touched my heart and soul, very good piece you wrote, do you have music to it yet? thank you for commenting on Grinnell Remembered.
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Date: 5/18/2011 3:46:00 PM
I unfortunately, do not right now. It is a country song and I have the lyrics sung the way I want. I also play bass and drums, so I have a simple line for that, but I don't have the chords needed for an acoustic guitar. I have a friend at church that used to be in the music scene that could help me though. I'm glad you enjoyed this one James:)
Date: 5/17/2011 11:07:00 AM
I am so pleased to have had the pleasure to read your poetry this afternoon R.M. Thank you for sharing it with us. Hoping you have a week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2011 3:48:00 AM
wow, i think it is wonderful, a testimony to your writing, dads are in limited supply,such a great story from father to son and so on..
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Date: 5/16/2011 10:40:00 PM
As you guys can see, I actually wrote more songs before I started writing poetry. I wanted to share one I wrote a few years back called Little Man. I hope it touches your heart:) R.M.
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