Timothy Mcguire Poet Rhyme

Little Green Dress

I just bought this little green dress
Put it on and its a mess
Now its plain to see
Its not meant for me
Ill take it back I guess

It was a size nine
My husband said it looked fine
He didn't want to be mean
I wear size sixteen
He was drinking at the time

Green Dress Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Julia Ward
12/03/19

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Lindsay Laurie December 7, 2019 at 5:36 PM G'day Timothy ... beer helps make the world a wonderful place until the hangover - thanks Timothy - Lindsay Timothy Mcguire December 10, 2019 at 4:00 PM Beer helps hangovers too! :0

Heidi Sands December 6, 2019 at 7:15 AM LoL! Thank you for the laugh this morning. Well done :) Timothy Mcguire December 6, 2019 at 3:33 PM I'm glad I gave you a laugh! Thanks

Line Gauthier December 4, 2019 at 7:53 AM LOL what a sweet husband. Fun poem, Timothy. Timothy Mcguire December 4, 2019 at 3:50 PM Thank you Line

Caren Krutsinger December 4, 2019 at 12:39 AM This is so true in so many ways. A child once brought me a wild dress saying "my mom says you will wear anything". It was a size 2. I wear a size 14. Ha! Timothy Mcguire December 4, 2019 at 3:51 PM Its the thought that counts! :) Na Na December 4, 2019 at 12:40 AM lol Caren Hello I`m Back :)

Na Na December 4, 2019 at 12:38 AM lol Tim this is great. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing Timothy Mcguire December 4, 2019 at 3:51 PM Thank you Gregory

Jenish Somadas December 4, 2019 at 12:16 AM ##He didn't want to be mean## Sure.. Maybe thatz the reason.. But 9 and 16 are not neighbors.. I wonder how did you get in!! Na Na December 4, 2019 at 12:40 AM Jenish come check out my 1st attempt of writing a shape poem. :) not too bad if I so myself :) Timothy Mcguire December 4, 2019 at 12:36 AM I was drinking too! :)