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Little Fountain

Spewing Blue bubbles swim Following the current Over to the concrete railing Then pop

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Heidi Sands

Date: 6/7/2017 2:22:00 PM

I like this fun one ! :)

James Inman

Date: 5/31/2017 2:22:00 AM

Lots of possible interpretations and undertones in this seemingly simplistic piece Juli-Michelle. Full of metaphor.

John Anderson

Date: 5/31/2017 1:17:00 AM

Congratulations with your place in the Cinquain contest. A delightful poem that exemplifies what the form is about. Very nice poem, very well done. It creates an image in so few words. The ending is charming. Cheers,

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2017 1:05:00 AM

This is SO cute, Juli. And thanks so much for your recent contest!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/29/2017 3:08:00 PM

ohh, streaks of youth so lively in mood and tonality, juli... much delighted!..huggs

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 5/26/2017 4:15:00 PM

Exactly. Dead on image. Great write and a superb read. Thank you.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 5/26/2017 8:20:00 AM

Excellent image.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/25/2017 4:01:00 PM

very descriptive Juli-Michelle:-) hugs jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 5/25/2017 3:13:00 PM

This was fun and summery. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/25/2017 3:06:00 PM

A sweet image! GL!