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Little Fountain

Spewing
Blue bubbles swim
Following the current
Over to the concrete railing
Then pop

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Heidi Sands

June 7, 2017 at 2:22 PM

I like this fun one ! :)

James Inman

May 31, 2017 at 2:22 AM

Lots of possible interpretations and undertones in this seemingly simplistic piece Juli-Michelle. Full of metaphor.

John Anderson

May 31, 2017 at 1:17 AM

Congratulations with your place in the Cinquain contest. A delightful poem that exemplifies what the form is about. Very nice poem, very well done. It creates an image in so few words. The ending is charming. Cheers,