Little Duckie

Little duckie swimming across the lake,
making a little duckie wake,
trying to get to the other side,
head and beak up, full of pride,
looking for his mother duckling,
and his other sibling sucklings,
now he has them in his sight,
swimming hard, with all his might,
now little duckies are all together,
you might say,
birds of a feather,
in the lake they go now one by one,
I guess you'de call this,
some great duckie fun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 9:31 AM
It was pleasure to read your poetry today Susan. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 10:20 PM
This truly is some great duckie fun, Susan. I enjoyed it. LUv, Andrea
Culverhouse Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 12:54 PM
This looks more like a rhyme than an acrostic to me. It is very cute I like the duckies. Enjoyed reading your work.
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