Little Darlings

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August 17, 2024

Nursery Rhymes Poetry Contest (Not more than 12 lines, Not more than 10 syllables in each line)

Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Two dazzling dainty darlings, Delightful flowers on a tree, Fancy pretence funny role-play, Sing alluring songs, no worry! Favourite choice playing house, Invite friends to flavoured tea, Decorative cups and pots as well, Welcoming hosts, amazing to see! Decked gracefully, embellished hair, Blushing cheeks, gorgeous smile, Angelic beauty of innocence, Oh my, what a captivating style! Picture 2

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thriveni c mysore

Date: 8/28/2024 2:07:00 AM

beautiful. congratulations dear poet.cheers.

Beata Agustin

Date: 8/28/2024 1:36:00 AM

Wow! Congrats... Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end... God bless you.

Joseph May

Date: 8/19/2024 4:04:00 PM

Lovely write

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/19/2024 5:15:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Joseph.

Ink Empress

Date: 8/18/2024 8:16:00 PM

This is adorable and so catchy with a lyrical tune to your words woven here in such a seamless manner! The first line with alliterations and the descriptive nature of this lovely poem truly is outstanding! “ worry! Favourite choice playing house, Invite friends to flavoured tea, ” such innocence! Soul warming to read! Best wishes for the contest dear mala! Youve nailed it

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/19/2024 11:36:00 AM

Dear Empress, your most beautiful comment make my heart sing! You are such a great poetess - you took time to write such inspiring words! Truly appreciate - you have even mentioned the words you liked - Dear Friend, you are not only a great poet, but an unbelievably encouraging mentor-friend! Love and Hugs ~ Mala

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/17/2024 7:04:00 PM

So sweet and cute, Mala!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/19/2024 11:31:00 AM

Thanks, Kim. Enjoy writing for children.