Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Rhyme

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August 17, 2024

Nursery Rhymes Poetry Contest (Not more than 12 lines, Not more than 10 syllables in each line)

Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Little Darlings

Two dazzling dainty darlings, 
Delightful flowers on a tree, 
Fancy pretence funny role-play, 
Sing alluring songs, no worry! 

Favourite choice playing house, 
Invite friends to flavoured tea, 
Decorative cups and pots as well, 
Welcoming hosts, amazing to see! 

Decked gracefully, embellished hair, 
Blushing cheeks, gorgeous smile, 
Angelic beauty of innocence, 
Oh my, what a captivating style! 


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thriveni c mysore August 28, 2024 at 2:07 AM beautiful. congratulations dear poet.cheers.

Beata Agustin August 28, 2024 at 1:36 AM Wow! Congrats... Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end... God bless you.

Joseph May August 19, 2024 at 4:04 PM Lovely write Malabika Ray Choudhury August 19, 2024 at 5:15 PM Thank you, Dear Joseph.

Ink Empress August 18, 2024 at 8:16 PM This is adorable and so catchy with a lyrical tune to your words woven here in such a seamless manner! The first line with alliterations and the descriptive nature of this lovely poem truly is outstanding! “ worry! Favourite choice playing house, Invite friends to flavoured tea, ” such innocence! Soul warming to read! Best wishes for the contest dear mala! Youve nailed it Malabika Ray Choudhury August 19, 2024 at 11:36 AM Dear Empress, your most beautiful comment make my heart sing! You are such a great poetess - you took time to write such inspiring words! Truly appreciate - you have even mentioned the words you liked - Dear Friend, you are not only a great poet, but an unbelievably encouraging mentor-friend! Love and Hugs ~ Mala

Kim Rodrigues August 17, 2024 at 7:04 PM So sweet and cute, Mala! Malabika Ray Choudhury August 19, 2024 at 11:31 AM Thanks, Kim. Enjoy writing for children.