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Little Boy Making Hot Chocolate

A cup of hot chocolate was all he wanted
Dropped cocoa; it flew in the air, he stood daunted  


For L. Milton contest couplet
Written: 12/03/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
January 15, 2022 at 11:23 PM
Oh this is great! I remember doing this also!
Y. Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 10:17 AM
Lol! Sara, I laughed out loud reading this one. I enjoyed the read. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
Kendrick Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 10:28 AM
Alexis, I am glad you got a chuckle from this one. Laughter is the best medicine, so you experienced some healing in reading it. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Horne Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 7:11 AM
LOL, I can see this one
Kendrick Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 6:21 AM
Why, thank you, Jack. I appreciate you dropping by. Sara
Daniel Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 5:45 AM
I have never tasted hot chocolate though it sounds extremely yummy, great couplet, Sara:)
Kendrick Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 6:22 AM
Jo, You definitely need to try some topped with marshmallows. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Wolf Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 8:17 PM
Perhaps the cup was haunted... G.L. in the contest, Sara. :) gw
Kendrick Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 2:47 AM
Gershon, Perhaps it was. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Kalita Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 4:12 PM
An amusing and amazing couplet sara, can smell those flavors.. Silpika
Kendrick Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 2:50 AM
Thank you. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Skelly Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 2:49 AM
Sara, hot chocolate one of my favourites with a marshmallow.......Funny couplet just right for the contest...Delice
Kendrick Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 3:03 AM
Delice, I like those marshmallows as well. I can't remember if our grandson likes the marshmallows or not. I don't think he does. Thank you for dropping by. Sara
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 6:28 AM
Hi Sara, enjoyed your story about the cute little boy. It's fun to watch them. Love ~ Mala
Kendrick Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 3:00 AM
Yes, children add spice to our lives. Thanks for the visit. Sara
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 3:55 PM
HelloSara Kendrick, the poor little boy. blessings my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 12:12 PM
Hello Sara, you are welcome my friend. enjoy your day. Hugs.
Kendrick Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 2:55 AM
Thank you, Darlene. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Cunningham Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 2:17 PM
Kids are curious but sometimes the unexpected happens. Hope he got his hot chocolate in the end. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 2:49 AM
Yes, Tom, he got his hot chocolate. He was always independent, so he tried to do things for himself. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 11:25 AM
cute and fun, Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 7:11 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit. Sara
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December 4, 2021 at 11:18 AM
Your explanation to Victor makes this poem all the more heartwarming. Then the clean up. God bless him. <3 and God give you strength.
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 7:06 AM
Kim, Thanks for asking God to give me strength. I need all I can get. Your visit is encouraging. Sara
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December 4, 2021 at 8:42 AM
Sara dear friend, a very special touching write which touched my heart from a wonderful human being as yourself about her very special grandson, Bless you my friend, Jennifer.
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 4:15 AM
Jennifer, Yes, our grandson is special in so many ways. Your visit is uplifting. Sara
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December 4, 2021 at 2:28 AM
A bit sad.
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 5:07 AM
Victor, I wasn't upstairs when it happened but in the laundry room in the basement and he did not get punished for his exploits. It was a big mess for me to clean up because he had tried to clean it by himself and only spread it everywhere. It was our grandson, but spills are quite regular now as he has Huntington's Disease, and it is an everyday happening with spills and dropping things. God grant me the serenity to accept what I can't change. Thanks for the visit. Sara
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