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Little Blue Bird of Rain

Little Blue Bird of rain. Rain, rain go away Little Blue Bird of Rain, needs to shine again In her version the sun dried, up all her tears Leaving hurtful rain inside the bird Destructive past sudden cheers Waking up to empty words When abandoned by her peers Just not knowing what had just occurred Drowning herself in a life of Jane Doe. Never know who she really is When all she loves hanging her lowest moment The rain brought out Mary-Jane. As the bird lost its glow. The rain tricked her once to use Cocaine. As her feathers met that one Joe. He broke her wing and brought more Rain. Very young, very sweet. Living her life in the fast lane. Hard for her to stand on her feet. Balanced her life on one leg, like the crane. Curtains hang over her wings. While she let no one near her domain. While she flies through the heavy rain. She finds her comfort with a pen. Using the lords name in vain. Cursing all her backstabbing friends With no one around to explain? All the sorrow left her on a railroad track. Ending up like the runaway train. Only she can get her life back. If for myself I ever felt pain? I felt more pain at what she wrote about. In my face on my left side Your poetry comes to life in my head. Visions of her wanting to be dead. Oh! How I wish this life she did not dread. You hide the tears you shed so well. A life with balls you cut the chains. You diss, Your parents to go to hell. Little Blue Bird of Rain, don't let them fools drive you insane. Little Blue Bird of Rain. If a sparrow could show you, There is more to life than pain. Under the umbrella, the sparrow would cover you. No one wants to see her colors drain. What a world to master her feathers into art. The gift of words runs through her vein The paintings on her wall. A dream of a bad seed of grain. One day our Little Blue Bird will stand tall. To free herself from all the Rain. To: Rain aka- Joy Loveless Our sweet 16-year-old P.D. 1-1-10

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/11/2016 10:35:00 AM
A heartfelt write Linda..After the pain and the rain the little blue will spread its wings and soar in the sunshine again.. hugs
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Date: 3/28/2016 12:06:00 AM
It is hard to see others suffer and not really have much to offer, except time and a listening ear.
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Date: 4/6/2015 4:59:00 PM
PD, this is a wonderfully, yet sad piece of poetry. HUGS My friend. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. A 7 from me. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 9/11/2014 1:23:00 AM
no not here either.
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Date: 12/2/2013 7:31:00 AM
Linda, Your poems just amaze me. You are such a special woman. I hope you will always find happiness. Your friend.....Hugs...Roger
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Date: 10/21/2013 2:00:00 AM
What did your daughter think of this likes this or not ;} thank you for coming to read my Fairy Tales, I had no idea it won in any place ;} "5th "
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Date: 10/18/2013 11:28:00 PM
HI !!! This is a lovely tribute to your daughter. Its sad and deep mixed with devotion and care. You allow the reader to actually see what's in your soul and heart. Nice job
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Date: 9/15/2013 2:16:00 AM
just wonderful ,excellent
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Date: 1/21/2013 8:31:00 AM
Hi, my dearest sis! Are you here on the soup? I'm reading again some of your outstanding writes when I was not yet here on the soup before going to bed tonight. So enjoyed! Thank you so much. love and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/11/2012 9:06:00 AM
this is wonderful PD, an oldie, and i just love it,, you are indeed a "lone Star"
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Date: 9/29/2012 1:30:00 PM
Asking Love to smile while the rain seems to hold us for ransom is a bold thing to do, but sometimes the only way to survive with dignity - this poem is a beautiful means to support a friend PD. - I love your sensativity - your new avatars are great; the one with the Goddess and blazing lake of fire really suited you - J.A.B. %
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Date: 9/29/2012 12:37:00 PM
lovely write, PD : ) I wanted to say thanks - loved both your contests. Have a great weekend xx
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Date: 1/17/2012 8:33:00 PM
and of course I will do it while watching tv. heehee
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Date: 1/17/2012 8:32:00 PM
I came all the way back to this oldie to say. What the HELL are you doing on Soup when you are at a movie? hahahahaha. Give me a break, PD. even I the greatest addict of them ALL would not be reading Soup comments in a movie. well, it would help if I knew HOW to text. hahahahaha. I will probably stay here half an hour longer and then go upstairs to exercise. I do this dumb thing where I step up and down on my little stepping board and also run in place for half an hour (nights I don't use gym)
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Date: 1/6/2012 10:34:00 PM
Coming back to this golden oldie. (I can see my comment here too!) Wanted to tell you sorry for all the stress you must be having. It's very sad, Irma. I hope it will be straightened out soon, Sweetie. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/13/2011 8:05:00 PM
lol.. congrats to myself,,, .. for a wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... my own poem...lol,.. me
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Date: 5/10/2011 3:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured
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Date: 5/9/2011 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations P.D. on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/9/2011 7:00:00 AM
Tough life for little Blue Bird. Congrats on the feature. Love, daver
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Date: 5/9/2011 4:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, P.D.
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Date: 5/8/2011 5:05:00 PM
Congrats P.D. my BFF on your featured poem this week on P.S. a super great piece to share with us all with luv on this special day of luv.. your BFF forever ..
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Date: 11/11/2010 10:59:00 AM
I remember this oldy but goody! sweet but with a touch of sadness...enjoyed reading this again too-- ok one last poem then I'm gone for now ok?
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Date: 6/4/2010 8:06:00 PM
hey I never did congratulate you for this---so belated congrats! will be keeping my eyes peeled for that Poetry Report of yours--hopefully those 2 you're waiting for replied back already!! :)
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Date: 5/13/2010 8:53:00 AM
Lovely writte, PD! Enjoyed reading your write today! And thank you for all your kind comments...Habve a nice week(end)...Gert
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Date: 4/27/2010 1:03:00 PM
ok, I came to see it, and it looks like I had read it, but maybe i was not aware about its winning a contest. It was Deb's? a Big fat CONGRATS, P.D. LUv, andrea ps. Hope you will tell me your animal on my blog before it scrolls away!
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