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I took one look and my breath left my body you were mesmerizing in your little black dress I felt my head actually swoon when I saw you dancing under the moon. You didn't see me looking at you I was relieved of that fact had you noticed me staring I wouldn't have known how to act. When you twirled the light caught the blue hem imagine my surprised that it twinkled like stars mirroring your eyes. No other woman matched your perfection your smile, those lips and that perfect complexion. The wedding was beautiful but all that aside I'll share with you a secret: you were more radiant than even the bride.

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