Little Bits Of Me




chisel to mortar 
little bits of me exposed 
annihilation

ashes to ashes cinders of love still remain inside life's refrain
a perfect snowflake cooling the surrounding air evaporation
lost in timelessness Harnassing power of stars illumination
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Deschler Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 6:18 PM
No two snowflakes are alike, yet each one is perfect... As well as beautiful and unique, just like your poetry. So well done, Vie :)
Rose  Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 12:59 PM
You gladden my heart with your sweet comment Kelly, sending ribbons of friendship ties, be well !
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January 21, 2024 at 6:12 AM
Four wonderful haiku my friend, all with vivid imagery, I really like the second one the most.. Nicely done dear poetic friend..
Rose  Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 11:33 AM
Glad you enjoyed the refrain of love Silent One
Sharma  Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 5:13 AM
Oh my, you always weave words with such eloquence beautiful Rose.. This chain of haiku has a profound and soulful feeling to it, especially it dives deeper into the spiritual realms, describing the ephemeral yet eternal nature of ourselves.."cinders of love still remain " Very truthfully conveyed.."a perfect snowflake cooling the surrounding air" And especially "Harnassing power of stars" That almost reflects a cosmic quality that reigns in within one's divine existence..This is a FAVE from you
Rose  Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 11:32 AM
May we always working in adjoining force, conspiring with the stars, moon and sun dear friend, :)
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