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Little Bits Of Me

chisel to mortar 
little bits of me exposed 
annihilation

ashes to ashes 
cinders of love still remain  
inside life's refrain 

a perfect snowflake 
cooling the surrounding air   
evaporation 

lost in timelessness 
Harnassing power of stars
illumination 
 

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Kelly Deschler Date: 1/23/2024 6:18:00 PM No two snowflakes are alike, yet each one is perfect... As well as beautiful and unique, just like your poetry. So well done, Vie :) Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/24/2024 12:59:00 PM You gladden my heart with your sweet comment Kelly, sending ribbons of friendship ties, be well !

Silent One Date: 1/21/2024 6:12:00 AM Four wonderful haiku my friend, all with vivid imagery, I really like the second one the most.. Nicely done dear poetic friend.. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/21/2024 11:33:00 AM Glad you enjoyed the refrain of love Silent One

Hiya Sharma Date: 1/21/2024 5:13:00 AM Oh my, you always weave words with such eloquence beautiful Rose.. This chain of haiku has a profound and soulful feeling to it, especially it dives deeper into the spiritual realms, describing the ephemeral yet eternal nature of ourselves.."cinders of love still remain " Very truthfully conveyed.."a perfect snowflake cooling the surrounding air" And especially "Harnassing power of stars" That almost reflects a cosmic quality that reigns in within one's divine existence..This is a FAVE from you Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/21/2024 11:32:00 AM May we always working in adjoining force, conspiring with the stars, moon and sun dear friend, :)