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Little Bits Of Me

chisel to mortar little bits of me exposed annihilation ashes to ashes cinders of love still remain inside life's refrain a perfect snowflake cooling the surrounding air evaporation lost in timelessness Harnassing power of stars illumination

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/23/2024 6:18:00 PM

No two snowflakes are alike, yet each one is perfect... As well as beautiful and unique, just like your poetry. So well done, Vie :)

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/24/2024 12:59:00 PM

You gladden my heart with your sweet comment Kelly, sending ribbons of friendship ties, be well !

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/21/2024 8:33:00 AM

so eloquent and graceful imagery, dear Rose. Your Haikus seem soulful, almost cosmic or celestial. I like the last Haiku the best...and I like how you structured your poem. A gentle masterpiece! hugs, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/21/2024 11:34:00 AM

When we gather ourselves to the light of a star, become hope for others :)

Silent One

Date: 1/21/2024 6:12:00 AM

Four wonderful haiku my friend, all with vivid imagery, I really like the second one the most.. Nicely done dear poetic friend..

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/21/2024 11:33:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed the refrain of love Silent One

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/21/2024 5:13:00 AM

Oh my, you always weave words with such eloquence beautiful Rose.. This chain of haiku has a profound and soulful feeling to it, especially it dives deeper into the spiritual realms, describing the ephemeral yet eternal nature of ourselves.."cinders of love still remain " Very truthfully conveyed.."a perfect snowflake cooling the surrounding air" And especially "Harnassing power of stars" That almost reflects a cosmic quality that reigns in within one's divine existence..This is a FAVE from you

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/21/2024 11:32:00 AM

May we always working in adjoining force, conspiring with the stars, moon and sun dear friend, :)