Little Bare Feet

Playful footsteps running through the door
muddy footprints all over the floor

Feet splashing in bath time waters
occasionally slipping in the shower

Feet over my head on the park swing
feet in the sand pit joyfully rolling

Hiding feet behind curtains and walls
standing on toes feeling tall

Angry stomping feet evading tears
happy jumping feet testing chairs

Soon these little feet will be ensconced in shoes
shouldering bags and heading to school

Hands wave goodbye, fore head kissed
but the little bare feet will be sorely missed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/10/2011 11:18:00 AM
Congrats Afroze on your fantastic win in this contest..a lovely write on these beautiful bare feet..gautami
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Date: 6/9/2011 7:28:00 PM
ahhhh, this is SO sweet, I loved it Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:20:00 AM
Accept my congratulations on the win in the contest of Francine, Afroze
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:56:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Afroze. Excellent write. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 6/8/2011 11:10:00 AM
congrats Afroze on your great win with this delightful write luv..
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Date: 6/8/2011 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Barefoot"contest Afroze. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2011 10:28:00 AM
just wonderful ! congrats on your 7th place win in the contest Afroze
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Date: 6/4/2011 9:08:00 AM
An excellent write from you Afroze..best wishes...thanks for your kind comment at my page...
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Date: 6/4/2011 5:07:00 AM
This is lovely Afroze, the images are clear and nice. Have you reached Hyd?
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