Little B S

tigers chase a boy - -
he licks his lips as they run
faster and faster

for Deb's contest
just loved this story when I was five

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/13/2017 2:33:00 PM
I don't know the story of the boy and the tiger but this reminds me of the song Albert and the Lion lol:-) Great humour jack:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/11/2017 9:02:00 PM
So this warped sense of humour is not entirely recent...? ;-) Well done.
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Date: 6/4/2017 5:58:00 PM
what a cute little entry. I did not have a clue on that contest!!!
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Date: 5/24/2017 2:22:00 PM
Good luck in the contest! is it referencing Jungle book? Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 5/24/2017 12:15:00 PM
such a powerful chase in 'ku form, jack.. wishing you well at debbie's.. huggs
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Date: 5/24/2017 10:15:00 AM
I don't know the story, but your poem (read in isolation) has a dark edge. Nice.
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Date: 5/23/2017 8:42:00 PM
I remember the sounds of the jungle and all the different animals but none as impressive as Shere Khan the tiger. This story has had many changes to it over the years. I always found it so entertaining. A wonderful haiku Jack. : ) 7
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Date: 5/23/2017 4:21:00 PM
I love this poem, Jack, I can see the poor little boy exhausted fleeing.... since it's for a contest good luck sir....~*
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