Lit From Inside

life's a lava lamp                    .             as image beings
driven by heat of atoms          .             in a painting of a dream
and we are conscious              .             titled mine free will
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 3:53 PM
Nice one for the imagery!
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August 26, 2018 at 11:36 AM
Great imagery Sand..
Krutsinger Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 12:30 AM
"life's a lava lamp" - in so many ways, flexible, flowing, out of control, unusual, unflappable, determined, hot. Nice!
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