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the heart forgives...the mind will not forget


Honorable Mention Brian Strand's # 178 contest
05/22/2012
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Sabuj Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 4:44 AM
Buhain-Baello Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 2:00 AM
Unique form of poetry using one line but carrying a weight of thought. Brilliant!
Turner Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 8:22 AM
I just told a friend of mine those same words the other day. Exactly right.
Goller Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 8:05 AM
Congratulation, the mind seems to never rest, thanks for sharing it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich
Braithwaite Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 7:44 AM
Very good.
Neels Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 11:43 AM
So much truth in this one Carol.. Hope your weekend's been great thus far, love Wilma
Scott Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 1:26 PM
I could not agree more but hoding on to greif slowly eats you away x david scott
Maverick Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 1:05 PM
I have enjoyed the reading of this one Carol can see a restless quality in this also; well done on the H M :)
Renee Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 11:59 AM
so true
M V Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 11:51 PM
This is a truth,Carol.Congratulations on your win!
A   Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 6:49 PM
Carol,, Congratulations in, Brian's contest # 178 "' it's been an honor reading all these sweet hits... especially since i miss them all on the 200 poems of the day ;-) God Bless*~ PD
Babcock Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 5:46 PM
How true this statement is. We can forgive but it does not mean we will not remember. love phyl
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 6:50 AM
Awesome words of truth, Carol! Congrats on your win. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Guzzi Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 5:56 PM
Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love
Harrington Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 10:29 AM
True.
Khemlani Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 10:51 PM
Thank you for the praise. I loved this statement. So true and pure. Keep writing. Cheers
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 7:27 PM
Big congrats to you making the winners' list. Not an easy feat with his contests!
Williams Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 2:27 PM
Carol congrats on your win..David
Devnath  Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 12:43 PM
It's from your depth inner consciousness presented with very simple and true like Diamond words, a great philosophy of acute sense. Loved always, bl
Grisetti Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 12:23 PM
I wish I could forget certain things. Terrific how you fir so much into one line. Congratulations.
O'Leary Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 9:56 AM
Short and to the point! Congrats... Terry
Brown Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 6:00 AM
Thank you all. Love, Carol
May Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 5:49 AM
congrats on your win Carol
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 10:10 PM
This is the sorry truth. Sometimes with me, however, my mind does forget. I am terribly forgetful!!!
Harrell Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 9:14 PM
"So true. But God can slide our mind into an abyss of forgetfulness just at the right opportunity. Love ya. Thanks for visiting my site. Toquyen"
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