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the heart forgives...the mind will not forget

Honorable Mention Brian Strand's # 178 contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 1/29/2014 4:44:00 AM
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Date: 7/17/2012 2:00:00 AM
Unique form of poetry using one line but carrying a weight of thought. Brilliant!
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Date: 7/11/2012 8:22:00 AM
I just told a friend of mine those same words the other day. Exactly right.
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Date: 6/26/2012 8:05:00 AM
Congratulation, the mind seems to never rest, thanks for sharing it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 6/24/2012 7:44:00 AM
Very good.
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Date: 6/10/2012 11:43:00 AM
So much truth in this one Carol.. Hope your weekend's been great thus far, love Wilma
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Date: 6/8/2012 1:26:00 PM
I could not agree more but hoding on to greif slowly eats you away x david scott
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Date: 6/2/2012 1:05:00 PM
I have enjoyed the reading of this one Carol can see a restless quality in this also; well done on the H M :)
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Date: 6/2/2012 11:59:00 AM
so true
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Date: 5/24/2012 11:51:00 PM
This is a truth,Carol.Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/24/2012 6:49:00 PM
Carol,, Congratulations in, Brian's contest # 178 "' it's been an honor reading all these sweet hits... especially since i miss them all on the 200 poems of the day ;-) God Bless*~ PD
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Date: 5/24/2012 5:46:00 PM
How true this statement is. We can forgive but it does not mean we will not remember. love phyl
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Date: 5/24/2012 6:50:00 AM
Awesome words of truth, Carol! Congrats on your win. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 5/23/2012 5:56:00 PM
Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love
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Date: 5/23/2012 10:29:00 AM
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Date: 5/22/2012 10:51:00 PM
Thank you for the praise. I loved this statement. So true and pure. Keep writing. Cheers
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Date: 5/22/2012 7:27:00 PM
Big congrats to you making the winners' list. Not an easy feat with his contests!
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Date: 5/22/2012 2:27:00 PM
Carol congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/22/2012 12:43:00 PM
It's from your depth inner consciousness presented with very simple and true like Diamond words, a great philosophy of acute sense. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/22/2012 12:23:00 PM
I wish I could forget certain things. Terrific how you fir so much into one line. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/22/2012 9:56:00 AM
Short and to the point! Congrats... Terry
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Date: 5/22/2012 6:00:00 AM
Thank you all. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/22/2012 5:49:00 AM
congrats on your win Carol
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Date: 5/21/2012 10:10:00 PM
This is the sorry truth. Sometimes with me, however, my mind does forget. I am terribly forgetful!!!
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Date: 5/21/2012 9:14:00 PM
"So true. But God can slide our mind into an abyss of forgetfulness just at the right opportunity. Love ya. Thanks for visiting my site. Toquyen"
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