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Listen To My Rhyme

only you could tell if something was wrong and now you think that i'm never okay and that's not okay i'm fine, can't you tell? did you see me smile today? you told me that you wanted to make me so happy and that you were never happy unless i was too unless that's not true i'd like you to leave me alone, or adieu remember that i broke your heart three times? remember how it felt when it split? use your little wit and realize that you don't need to take another hit not for me, not anymore, i care for you so and even though i'll never admit it anymore though we were more i am done with this all, and i'm leaving the shore i need to get away, and you know it's true but seriously, boy, i'm totally fine listen to the rhyme when i'm gone, i'll tell you it was a matter of time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/13/2012 7:28:00 PM
love the honesty. but hated the victom.
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Date: 6/13/2012 1:03:00 PM
aww how lovley I hear your rhyme, and thanks for your kind coments on my litle footles God bless from diane
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Date: 6/13/2012 8:57:00 AM
This one is so very passionate and well written, thnx for sharing;) Jag
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Date: 6/13/2012 8:22:00 AM
wow,you express yourself beautifully,when leaving shore take a life jacket, called poetry,great write Juli
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